A Sister's Love

by Connie   Jul 13, 2006


When you are young ~ you are just sisters
You just take it for granted they'll be there.
I've found as you grow older, if you are lucky...
This sister soon becomes your best buddy.

Now I was blessed with two great sisters
Together we have had so much fun.
I know if I'm ever down and need them
I just need to call ~ they will come!

I'm there for them ~ they're here for me
Through laughter or tears, it doesn't matter.
Not all sisters have this kind of relationship
Thank God for my two loving sisters!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    4/5 because there was really no flow. the word choice was ok but it needs a little work.

    very nice poem. i loved the topic

  • 16 years ago

    by Brigitte

    Awe, what a sweet meaning for a poem =] So cute! The flow was a bit choppy throughout the poem, but your message came through sweet and clear. I liked it! Nice job

  • 17 years ago

    by Synh

    Awww... that as really sweet :)

    Those '~' are kinda distracting though but that could be just me.

    It was okay. Not great, not horrible. The flow was great but I think you could've used better words.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    Wow! Connie! Since I read your first poem you have improved SO MUCH. It really looks like you're taking what people say on board, and the structure and flow of your words is really coming together. And what's most important is you don't ramble on (like I'm doing now) and it all comes across as so heartfelt.

    Good stuff!

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