Pain

by CalVein   Jul 13, 2006


Pain...

This feeling is so vain,
Why do i feel this way again?
A question i already know the answer, damn.
It's her again, with the same game,
Going deeper and deeper into my vein,
Are you just playing with my brain?
So this is how it feels to be pierced,
By a sharp arrow with Hatred and Tears,
Are you just hiding or are you really you?
This is what i want to know when i see you.
Interest have fade away,
From Red to Grey,
No more play,
There's too much in one day,
The truth is all I'm asking...i pray...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Your beginning had been really strong but it seemed to unravel near the end. Something about your words chosen. But man this was something...despite how sharp and raw it was seemed really cool. The beginning was definitely the strongest part so somehow it needs to tie into the end.
    ~Faith-less

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