Until

by Mich   Jul 13, 2006


So tired!
So tired of this
I just want it all to stop
The feelings
The weakness
These feelings make me weak
They make me cry
Unacceptable!!
A waste of time!
Time?
Time makes it worse.
It makes me think!
I feel so used,
Used by myself
Used by everything,
Everyone
But I cannot run
I cannot hide
Cannot hide from the inevitable
From my fate
From my destiny
There is no point.
Fore it all follows me.
It will never leave
Never!
Until...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Hey, great work on this, I loike the way you ended, ,leaving us hanging. I don't really understand what it was about but great work anyway.

    --Steph

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Mich --
    Wow, another poem full of emotion. You sure do have a lot of that, don`t you? Just a question, dear.
    "Untilâ?¦"
    I can infer just by my sense of intelligence that, that should say 'until', yet, it kind of doesn`t. Look into that for me, alright?
    But, Mich, Otherwise.. it was great. I really enjoyed it, as your work is stunning and entertaining at all possible levels. Thanks for sharing this work with me, and, much thanks for commenting on my newest song.

    Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    I Find That Your Poetry Is Even More Re-Markable Read Aloud...Shows More Emotion And Excitment...Yet Still Just As Beautiful If Read Silently...Kudos!
    xoxo-Nikki-xoxo 5/5

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