That was really good and i kno the feeling...my best friend was with my ex whom i absolutely fell in love with..after they broke up he came back to me and we hooked up. he said he wanted to be with me but later on he left me for my best friend for the 8th time! i feel pathetic and stupid...again...
on a brighter note u had the emotion there...a little hard to understand in terms of the situation but i got the general idea..nice work and thx for all your comments.
love ya lots,
sore

WOW, this is one of my favourites by you, it showed so much sadness and meaning, it was like a short story.
You have so much talent sweetie, never give that up.

But if you had the chance to turn back time would you? or would you live it all again. thats the question.

5/5 david