Liked it. short and straight to the point. 5\5. take care. love u to comment on any of mine.

I liked it lots
really good work
5/5
love ya
Sam

Wow, that was really powerful, short but really awesome. i like the head against the closed door part, but yeah 5/5, and you're a really good writer. check out some of my stuff if you want. xox bran*

Wow that was intense. awesome job, keep writing stuff like it. ill be sure to check it out

Hay was up you have really good work i like your poem alot 5/5