Beautiful Descriptivness!
"though she wont give in to the seductive whisper"

"She's staring with sad sightless eyes"

"she's shivering inside and out"
And The Imagery You Used When You Said a "Dusty Window" Is The Type Of Things That Make Me Want To Read a Poem, Because Its Not Just a Line Here And a Line There, Its Has Meaning That You Have To Pay Attention To & Grasp The Concept To Paint That Perfect Picture In Your Mind & Thats What You've Done, And I Think It Was Flawless...As Is Everything I've Seen From You So Far 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo
*Friends 4 Life*