Emotionless

Aww how sad! its really well written tho! well done! 5/5

Hey, first off...you have the same name as me lol..Alana..anywayz lol..this is a good poem..it expresses a lot...and i know exactly what you feel like cuz i've been there before...but don't lose all hope..thingz really do get better..just like therez alwayz a rainbow after the rain...rite? just don't give up..ull find some way to be happier..whether it may be talkin to friendz or family to get thingz out...it really helps..just do your own thing, and ull do fine..great job
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy