Comments : The fashion industry.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This is an honest poem and I love that. You truly expressed your thoughts about the fashion industry, and I think many of us can relate to that. It's true, fashion can be harsh, even if it looks pretty and amazing.

    Sometimes I feel like you, I'm not happy with my clothes or my lifestyle. I don't think I belong. I feel like a loser.

    This is my favorite part of your poem:

    I am not cool
    Because of my clothes
    The girls say I am pretty
    But that is not enough,

    Especially the last line, I always feel like...it's never enough.

    Great job!

    Keep writing.

    XoXo
    Gaby