Oh, How sweet!
I love the last stanza
you truly are a great writer, you have so much talent and your love poems are so sweet and inspiring...
Keep up the great work
Love
NemO XxXxXxXxX

Hey! brilliant job dear. u r too gud at love poems. words u used r amazing and so touching. keep writing. i enjoy reading ur poems.

luv

I love ur last stanza its very meaningful, it really sets out the story for this poem great work! xox sam

OMG...this poem is AMAZING!!!!! like seriously...absolutely AMAZING!! Your imagery was soooo deep and I can TOTALLY relate!!! 5/5 completely!! Keep it up!! This poem took my breath away...:)

Hey darl this was very emotion filled and powerful. very touching and very well written. good job expressin urself xx

That was very beautiful indeed! I really liked the way you finished your work with the words..."how much I always loved you"...It was very touching. I also wanted to thank you for commenting on one of my poems, and although you said you didnt ask for commenting back, this poem was worth the comment! Anyway, awesome poem and needless to say, "5/5".Well done!

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS......(^·^)

WOW... what could i possibly say.. another very deeply written piece...
you know what.. i'm just tired of loving your poems... write trash for once, so i can hate it.. lol
great work...

Much love,
Ipsita

"always loved you"......beautiful poem...5/5.....sumtimes ppl jus dont understand how much they r really loved....anyway great wrk my dear... :)

sonam

Nitin, you are just getting better and better with every new poem, and what I love about your poems are that each and every single one of them are unique. Loved this one... and your last stanza is just brilliant, honestly spoken and deeply written, any reader would feel the pain.

Take care
Michelle

Hi nit!!! hope all is well, havnt heard from you for a while... this is such a pretty and emotional peom. i love it.
makes me feel ooooh inside..
5/5 take care. elle.

Heart touching poem....could relate to it so well....take care and keep smiling....

Thanx to comment me.
you did in this poem great job.

Nice job x x x x

This is a brillant beautiful poem. aww it feels something in the mind and heart to knwo someone can care so much

Its sad but cute

Very deep. I loved the way you put the whole poem together.

Amazing poem! I love the end of it-It sums up the poem really well. It is a sweet love poem, yet is sad, which I like because you mixed both emotions together wonderfully. 5/5 Keep it up-

Your poem is really kool! it's about SUICIDE huh? it relates to me a lot! =)

Great job, i love your poem

I loved it soo much. you had so much meaning in your words..

niice good =)