This poem was great, keep up the awesome work.
babydavie

Hey thats a realy good poem it relayes much 2 me and i realy like it we should be friends heres my email address babyfaryloveyou@yahoo.com wriite me so we can be friends

Its a sad poem but really cute

I love this poem, its been put together very well. Keep up the good work!!! :)

I liked this one a lot.
The whole meaning, the whole concept, the whole thing!
Just an overall amazing poem, with a poignent (sp?) ending.
You need to get writing some more mister!! lol
5/5
*Gem*

Your poetry really reaches in and touches my heart. This was no exception! Excellent job my dear friend!