Wow... this was a very powerful poem.
The lines were short, and it flowed very well. This was an excellent poem.

5/5

This was very powerful, i get the depression thing..it sucks..im glad you are writing to get your feelings out!!

This is amazing its very good btw thnx for the comment sweetie!
DemonAngel

Amazing, wonderful, strong... You have real talent, but I bet you've heard that plenty of times before. I'm not going tell you what's good about your poem, because it seems you don't need to improve, instead I'll just tell you how much I love your poetry. I do love your poetry, and will continue coming back to read, if not comment.

~Purple~

Wow! This is great!! Very powerful! 5/5

You really are a very talented poet.. You get the feeling and emotion across so strongly in Your work. Excellent once again 5/5 xx

Wow!!! i love this poem because its so precise and fluent and beautifully written! man i dont know how to explain it...but all your poems are just so ----perfect...i think thats the right word :)
keep it up!
xx

This is an amazing poem. You are very talented and should keep it up. I can feel all the emotion that has been put into this poem. Very strong. 5/5.

..X..Jo..X..