Crimson floor

by jL   Jul 14, 2006


He tried to leave
But couldn't
As many held him back
He wanted to break free
From the multitude of hands around
Screaming
Bleeding tears and sweat
Struggling valiantly
To run and escape
Hatred burning through glistening eyes
He struggles and comes free
And runs in ecstasy
Insanity
And jumps for freedom
Flying down
And down
As he laughs
Crashing into the ground
Numb
As he last saw
From his shattered eyes
A crimson floor

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  • 17 years ago

    by TotaMariee

    I love this one,your obviously a very talented writer and i hope you keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ

    Wow very deep...ur a good writer..keep it up...5/5

    ~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

  • 18 years ago

    by xlovelyxdespairx

    Great poem.Your a great writer.

    much luv,
    jubilee dominguez

  • 18 years ago

    by brkendown

    This is really good i think it would make it better if you added just a few more details!

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