by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! .. Jul 14, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
From a boy to a man (to you..) |
by Synh
Awesome. You have an unbelievable talent that I so admire. |
I believe I can relate to this poem even at my age I have written one with the same thoughts somewhat |
by Jessica
Awww.. that was very good.. the descriptions were amazing.. the emotion was loud and clear.. but i did not like the flow.. it was very difficult to read.. none of the stanza's or lines were the same lenght and this made it hard to read.. try and fix that up and it will be better.. 5/5 |
by Bridgette
I really like this poem in it. It holds so much strength. You did an amazing job on this and hopefully the person that you wrote this to will see the new, older you. It's very well written and the flow and rhythm was good. Great job on this! 5/5 |
by Just Lucy
Another one of your stunning poems!! your style is unique and the way you explain your emotions is so real!! |