Closer

by Shane Peate   Jul 14, 2006


Come sit closer my dear

Let me hold your hand
Set the spark of love
And let the flame grow grand

Closer to me now

Your heart and mine combine
Our connection linked
Creation of a sensation divine

Closer and closer

This bond will never sever
We'll remain together
Always and forever

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  • 14 years ago

    by Loveless Dreamer

    Great poem.
    very well written.
    but i have to agree with random woman, it could've been longer.
    but other than that it was beautiful.
    feedback for my poems is very well appreciated.
    5/5

    -Scarlett Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by CassandraXVeronicaXONealaXLawson

    This poem was good but it should have been longer overall it was a great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I loved it..how you told her to come closer after ever line..it made the poem more intamite. lovely.

    Lissa

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