I loved it..how you told her to come closer after ever line..it made the poem more intamite. lovely.

Lissa

This poem was good but it should have been longer overall it was a great poem

Great poem.
very well written.
but i have to agree with random woman, it could've been longer.
but other than that it was beautiful.
feedback for my poems is very well appreciated.
5/5

-Scarlett Ann