Couldn\'t see it

by Navy SweetHeart   Jul 14, 2006


My heart is racing and i don\\\'t know why...
all i did was think of you and my mind when blank...
i went weak at the knees...
and fell to the ground cry ed \\\" please lord make him love me back...\\\"
i didn\\\'t even know i loved him...

how could it have been so
blind to me for so many years...
and why didn\\\'t i feel it before....
was it because the love wasn\\\'t there...

or could it have been we want what we can\\\'t see....
and now that you are no longer around... i can see what was right in front of me before...

it\\\'s true i have pushed so many away but maybe it\\\'s because i was waiting for you...
maybe my heart knew the love was there but i couldn\\\'t see it.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Get rid of the random /'s before all of the 's. Lol

    I love the emotion and feelings in this piece, I found it to be incredibly moving and at the same time kind of bittersweet.

    Structure isn't the best, and could probably be made better, along with getting rid of some of the I's.

    Love the ending line, very powerful and filled with so much melancholy and hope at the same time, and I loved the transistion of that.

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