Get rid of the random /'s before all of the 's. Lol

I love the emotion and feelings in this piece, I found it to be incredibly moving and at the same time kind of bittersweet.

Structure isn't the best, and could probably be made better, along with getting rid of some of the I's.

Love the ending line, very powerful and filled with so much melancholy and hope at the same time, and I loved the transistion of that.