This is a great poem. I can definitely relate to it and you did a good job at expressing your feelings. Great job on this! 5/5

Hey cute poem.. i really enjoyed it. keep up the great work.
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Hey i like this poem i've been on here a lot lately cause i got my heart brocken by my boyfriend that i have been going out with for a year! But anyways great poem it waz soooo cute! u must love her a lot. well i give u a 10/10.
sign, Rosie xox

Simple,Short and yet so deep and full of overflowing passion..great write indeed
all the best and take care
5/5