by Goran Rahim
My new poem to all of you |
by desigirl
Oh, I can not write anything this time, because I think writing some like "great poem" or "well written" is not enough for this poem, I feel every line of this poem and I feel like reading it over and over. |
by Tara Kay
I thought it was really good, it was a bit rocky at first but being a short poem it really was awesome |
This is a really good poem. It had a different kind of idea to it, and i liked it. I'm sure alot of people can relate to this poem. Great work. |
by Princess09
For a short poem it was great!! To the point and still had lots of emotion in it!!! good job!!! |
A very unique and passionate love poem |
by Jackie Marie
I love it. The only thing you need to fix is the word "lier". Isn't it spelled "liar". If you are right, I am sorry. It's not a big deal anyways. :) |
by freshta
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww |
by freshta
I meant PEN |
Wow this is fantastic. I love the uncharacteristic tone/message in this. It really makes you think. :) |
by Nelle
For it being so short it sure did have a lot of power in it! it was great |
A pretty simple poem, which I thought could have added some more to it. But, I did like it the way it is, and you did get straight to the point. Great job! 5/5 |
by libby
Oooh, this one I love. I think it's the concept that really got me, it's a cute way to think about things. I like the little rhyme at the end especially, really clinches things. |
by Tormented
This is such a good poem! not good AMAZING i cant even begin to describe how gd this poem is!! AWESOME MAN!! too gd...i can sooo totally relate to it.. this guy doesnt like my poems either n he doesnt believe in my love...but anywho we was on your poem!! yeh this poem is turly AMAZING believe me!! this probably one of ma favs now!!5/5!lol |
Awww this is cute, yet I didn't fully get it. =| It was perhaps too short and didn't flow to well.. |
by Robie Lincer
It was short,,, straight to the point,,, and awsome :D |
by Megann Lee
Short and sweet. Loved it. Very well written. Anmd ever though it was short it flowed really well. :) |
by AnnMarie
Once again, ify flow! It takes away your attention when the lines are long and short...... |
Hmmm..interesting poem. Very new topic, cool idea;) Good poem=D. I liked it. but the flow was a bit off and i just couldn't catch it. |
by Sarah Ann
Great poem. Short but simple with wonderful words. As usual, an awesome and effective write. xxx |