I liked it!! altough all the stress of trying 2 register then has made me 4get what i wanted 2 say!! oh well its a good poem though.

That was really good, the words were awesome, it flowed well, and was very strong, no weak points at all. well done

Good...the messages is true! just continue writing all what u feel i know u can write more god bless

Wow..that went right to the point...described so well and the words were well chosen:) I liked the idea. 5/5..amazing job:)