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by Kendal Feb 28, 2004 category : Sadness, depression / lost relationships
We broke up I still love you But I don't know how to tell you You moved on with you life Every relationship I have had Ended with me crying Nobody can measure up To the relationship what we had in my eye I still love you I don't know why I still love you Or even care about you as much as I do right now Or even why I thinking about you You were always there for me Never put me down Always knew how to smooth talk your way into my heart God please tell me why I love this guy as much as I do My heartaches for you I want to see you But to much bad memory's come back and haunt me like no others All my friends say move on Quit living in a dream world Pack up they say once trash always trash But you will always be in my heart But you took my heart I thought we're going to be together forever Is that living in a dream Or is that our future But God had different plans for us I guess I still love you Please comment & vote
by Johnathan David
Hey Kendal, I read 2 of your poems. Both good. I the only thing I would do in your poems is to take your time with them. Make sure that each line makes since. Try to have an outline in your mind to guide you as a structure. Keep up the good work. Johnathan