Great Great poem I loved it , You did a wonderful job with this poem ,I can tell it took alot of thought,I still feel you just ended it to soon I felt that there is more you can say and explain to the reader,but great poem

Wow this is really nice. I know how you feel and what you are trying to say. its true sometimes we really dont want to know how many girls have been all over our man. i like it the way you express yourself and the story behind it!!!!