Caitlin -
This is really good! The wording you used expressed a lot of emotion, and I think you did a really good job. The flow was perfect, and you added a lot of details which allowed for imagery. Great job, 5/5
Much thanks for your comment on my poem. =D

Love much,
Samantha Hollywood

This is an exellent poem. Very good!

Wow, this poem's really good. I think it has a very strong message, and that's what I liked the most about it. The ending was amazing, especially the last line. The descriptions were original, well written, and true. You expressed everything in a different way, but I still understood what you meant.

I loved these lines:

A girl's best 'friend'
But they see the outside reflection.

Great job!

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

The first stanza was the best. It gave a strong sense throughout but there was this flow problem in the last stanza with just the last line. Not sure but it kinda had this weird way to it. The second stanza delivered a powerful picture and well...nice job. Some great things were done with this piece. Great way in how to show a cool idea. Some word play that added this vivid, intense way to the poem.
~Faith-less

It started off perfectly but I think you trailed off towards the end.
~Emah

Wow, that was an interesting write. I guess we write our own thoughts on what those words are. Hmm, cool!

I thought the title should have read "Death" instead of dead. But it's up to you.