by Melissa S. Masucci Jul 15, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I had to give you back today. |
Although quite simplistic in language and style it is a lovely bittersweet piece. Particularly liked the final stanza - so poignant. |
by Tara Kay
I liked it, it wasnt the best ive read, but it was okay |
Not bad. You're right, it isn't your best, but it is older you say and we all grow with time and so does our abilities. |
O wow---I can't believe you wrote that in jr. high--It's really good and full of emotion! You are very talented-Keep it up! 5/5 |
I am sorry but I thought it was interesting and very good. |