by Melissa S. Masucci Jul 15, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
Fantastic confusion |
Excellent first stanza, wonderfully worded. |
I thought this was good too, The flow was a little off, but that doesn't really matter all that much. The emotions in this piece were great. I loved it. It kept my attention from start to finish. A wonderful write. Keep it up. && Thank you for your kind words on my poems. =) 5/5 |
I don't think this is supposed to be nature... -Looks around- I have a bit of a headache though. I'm not sure if I read it correctly... |
Your artistic nature really shows in your poems. |