Your artistic nature really shows in your poems.

I don't think this is supposed to be nature... -Looks around- I have a bit of a headache though. I'm not sure if I read it correctly...

Nontheless you have a great talent for writing. Keep it up.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I thought this was good too, The flow was a little off, but that doesn't really matter all that much. The emotions in this piece were great. I loved it. It kept my attention from start to finish. A wonderful write. Keep it up. && Thank you for your kind words on my poems. =) 5/5

Natalie``

Excellent first stanza, wonderfully worded.
Great poem throughout.