by Ike Dizzle Jul 15, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Never give up |
Sorry, but I didn't really like this piece at all. I liked the message, but that was about it. The rhythm was a little messy at times and I thought your rhymes were weak. Sorry again. |
by Pink Romance
AAAAAAWWWWWWWWSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOMMMMEEEEE ... U KNO WAT I WOULD SAY ,,, 2 KEEP A LONG STORY SHORT UR GOOOD! |
That was so touching so great that is inspiring |
by Riffy
This is great! |
Yup, this help and it sound like a great advice, great expressed and kno wat u r saying.. Yup yup, like I said, this help for others and yourself. Nice written! |