I Miss My Love

by Tormented   Jul 15, 2006


Like on soft lips
When they sing
Like A bee takes all the
Juice out of a flower
Far away in a forest when
A bird sings
I miss my love.

Every night we used to see
The moon from our houses
Even when we were so old
We were scared of adults
But we loved each other
On a quiet night
When the same moon comes up
I miss my love

Remember when we used to sing
Songs on our school trips
Remember when we used to
Tease other couples and got told off?
Pain strikes me
Everything is like a dream
Someone sets fire on my heart
When I pass from that same path
I miss my love

You used to say
"Someone will take me away from you"
I will find you wherever you will go
World changes and time passes
But whenever the bus of my life starts
I miss my love

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  • 18 years ago

    by Driver

    I really liked this poem. you could really tell how much absence was felt, it was as if i was missing it. really great job, i loved it.
    Driver

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats a sad poem! but you really used the bird singinf and the moon which made the poem really good!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww. So sad. =( I know how you feel, yet again lol. Don't worry. You'll get through it, and you'll be glad you did. =) Great write! xoxo 5/5

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    It is also nice

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindajane x

    Hey great poem i am s ure many people including my self can relate to this. just returning the favour because you commented on my poem and thanks again and well done x

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