I'll Never Be with You (Sonnet)

by Ike Dizzle   Jul 15, 2006


I look at it rainning and I see her tears
When I see the sunshine I see her grin
I think of her; she cast my fears away
I truly love her, is that a dang sin

I see her in Bowen each single day
Dream of her with thoughts that can't be expressed
Though my heart simply loves her anyway
My feelings are strong and deeply compressed

I see her walk these horrible looking halls
Hugging and talking to the same ol' guy
But I won't give up and won't say goodbye

After it's done, I don't know what to do
I realized I will never be with you.

(Each line should have 10 syllibles)

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  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    This is really great, make everything so smooth.. A lot of thought to it. Wow.. 10/10 -nessy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    As usual another fine work and thanks for the comment! 5/5 Peace and love!

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow, this type of poem seems kind of difficult. I think you did a good job, had great emotion, nicely descriptive. Keep up the good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychel

    I love the emotion expressed here. its truly wonderful. i know the feeling of seeing someone all the time but never being able to have them as yours. 5/5.
    ~raychel
    p.s. thanks for the comment