I love the emotion expressed here. its truly wonderful. i know the feeling of seeing someone all the time but never being able to have them as yours. 5/5.
~raychel
p.s. thanks for the comment

Wow, this type of poem seems kind of difficult. I think you did a good job, had great emotion, nicely descriptive. Keep up the good work 5/5

As usual another fine work and thanks for the comment! 5/5 Peace and love!

This is really great, make everything so smooth.. A lot of thought to it. Wow.. 10/10 -nessy