Thoughts Unoccuring

I've made revisions to it, then posted it here.. I hope you like it

The world's a blur,
Around me,
And around her,
And we're not even free,
So where are we?

I look to my left,
And look to my right,
Nothing seems
to feel alright.

Something seems familiar,
About her,
She seems to know me,
Can that be?

I wander my wonders,
Looking for answers,
That cannot be found,
And can only be lost.

Lost in my mind,
I turn around slowly,
I just seem to be
A girl that is lonely.

A thought just occurred,
Oh yes can it be?
That lonely lost girl,
Can it be me?

I've finally found truth,
My thoughts are so clear,
I know who I am,
I'm the one in the mirror.

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