by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel Jul 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She had a broken spirit |
Aww, this is so sad and beautiful, i loved how it flowed so well and i had a mental image in my head while reading this, its absolutely wonderful, keep it up,xxoo |
by BrokenMisery
Very pretty and sweet. The rhymes seemed a bit forced and it should be "bleeding through" not "bleeding threw". I think that the poem was a little un-original but was good all the same. Keep writing. |
This was really very well expressed, sad ending...but thats what life is all about |