This was really very well expressed, sad ending...but thats what life is all about
well written

all the best and take care
5/5

Very pretty and sweet. The rhymes seemed a bit forced and it should be "bleeding through" not "bleeding threw". I think that the poem was a little un-original but was good all the same. Keep writing.

Aww, this is so sad and beautiful, i loved how it flowed so well and i had a mental image in my head while reading this, its absolutely wonderful, keep it up,xxoo