Comments : Incased Hope

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather

    I thought that was a very beautiful, and emotional poem. I liked all the imagery used, and how you worded everything. It was short, sweet and right to the point. Also this poem flowed amazingly well.
    Great job 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    "You hold the decision to crush my heart
    I'd rather see light than a dark day.
    I gave you a chance a fresh new start
    You decided to turn and walk away."

    LOVED that stanza, especially the first line. Chris, you are such an amasingly talented writter, great work. You're on my favorites list:)

    -Steph