Wow this was great...I like the style you have and the idea of the poem very unique and great writing. 5/5

God Bless

-Chris

I Really Enjoyed Reading This Poem. I Usually Like Poems I Can Relate To And When I Read This All I Could Do Was Think About My Father. I'm Sorry You Have To Go Through Thinking The Worst Everyday, But This Poem Was Beautifully Worded And Rightfully Deserves My Vote Of 5/5.

This is a very well written peice, though at first I was unsure as to the meaning of its content it quickly came together into a strong clear peice. the repetition works very well and your expressions are shown well. I am sorry for what you are going through. this peice is fantastically written

5/5

Some nice repetition. Not really strong in the wording but it's cool. Emotion usage was great. The way it seemed sounded really heartfelt and really touching. Nice job on that. Content great but still it's the words that kinda brought this down. Nice job because it reaches out on the emotional plain quite.
~Faith-less

It was very sad, i like how you dont try to rhyme your poems, you just let it all flow from inside, it is really well written
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Very good poem hun, my friends mother is dieing at the moment and she too is scared of a phone call..or scared of coming home. Hold your chin up high darling and think positive xxxxxxx Rosie xXx

I liked it....it sounded like it could have been a song. The only thing that I didn't like is that, I think, it could have been more organized. *4/5*

Alyson