Evangelism

"Raise my fallen chin
And hold it up high
Give me the courage
That you hold inside."

^very beautiful stanza, something that I can relate to. I can just feel the Lord's finger underneath my chin, raising it so that I can look into His eyes to be reassured of His love. I am truly grateful that God gave you this poem to write and for you to share it with me!!

My only critique would be:

"And now I'm protected,
And I spread his word"

^I'd turn the second 'and' into an 'as' so it goes "And now I'm protected
As I spread His word"
And to capitalize all references to God such as the "Yous" and "Hims" kinda thing, if you know what I mean lol.
But other than that, perfect poem. Flowed very good and beautiful descriptions.

Much Love and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

Very good. the stanzas are great and rhyming. I like the whole idea and meaning of the poem. good job..

This one is another one of your great poems that I have read! You are a talented writer and i hope to read more of your work! 5/5

Sarah --
You did a beautiful job on this, honey. The rhyming didn`t seem forced at all, and neither did the flow. The spelling and grammar are perfect. =D I`m not sure really what else to say, except, 5/5. Keep this up.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

I really loved this one. The message is so simple yet so powerfull.

The lord whispered softly
But I clearly heard
And now I'm protected,
And I spread his word

I adore this stanza I think it is just so sweet and joyful.
The whole thing is a delight.