by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Jul 16, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
They're in bits and pieces, but they're something of a story I could knit together later on. Tell me what you think... |
by Michelle18
Wow!!!!!!!! this is a very deep and emotional poem..good job! |
by Chrissi
I enjoyed the poem Very much I truelyMakes you think, I think the reason someone may have rated it bad is cuz you swear at the end. I'm NOT the one who down rated you, infact i give them poem it self a 10/10 but i can olny give it a 5/5 but that'll do anyways, keep thinking up these things.. i totaly thrive on it lol |
by TeAr dROp
Wow!!! when i read your poems....how you put the words together is so good!!! and i like that keep it up!!! |
by emmerz
:O :O :O this was GREAT!! i LOVED it. the urgency of it all.... the truth of it all. in the second stanza, you said "The dreamer is out subconscious. "...im not sure if that totally works, or if i just cant understand it as well, but that was only one thing i saw in there that wasnt as flawless as the other parts. otherwise, WOW i think this would be something great.... it really makes people think about the dream of 'reality'.... |
This is amazing!! |