Probably the deepest and most meaningful poem I have read.
It was strong, really deep and powerful.
I loved the imagery, it made perfect sense in the strangest but most perfect way. keep it up
xxxxx

Wow, this poem took my breath away. it was very detailed and exactly what I like to see in a poem. it left me speechless. Well done and keep up your hard work. :)

Wow, I really liked this poem! Its like nothing i have read before! I would definetly say it was one of your best poems like Bryan said before! This poem totally made me think and i liked the message of the poem!!! Fabulous Job!!! 5/5!! Interesting Topic!!

I think your story would come out real good! and i love this sentence

"No matter how much one screams, they will never be heard."

it is very truee!!!

keep it upp
thanks for the comment on my poems it means alot to me!

Wow this poem is so good!you can see the emotion shining throughout the page!

Again, I love just love how you managed to fit it together, and make it flow amazingly well. It was great, very nice and easy reading. Lots of thoughts in it. I love it.

Really good 5/5

This is amazing!!

:O :O :O this was GREAT!! i LOVED it. the urgency of it all.... the truth of it all. in the second stanza, you said "The dreamer is out subconscious. "...im not sure if that totally works, or if i just cant understand it as well, but that was only one thing i saw in there that wasnt as flawless as the other parts. otherwise, WOW i think this would be something great.... it really makes people think about the dream of 'reality'....
5/5

Wow!!! when i read your poems....how you put the words together is so good!!! and i like that keep it up!!!

I enjoyed the poem Very much I truelyMakes you think, I think the reason someone may have rated it bad is cuz you swear at the end. I'm NOT the one who down rated you, infact i give them poem it self a 10/10 but i can olny give it a 5/5 but that'll do anyways, keep thinking up these things.. i totaly thrive on it lol

Wow!!!!!!!! this is a very deep and emotional poem..good job!