This really makes you think. Its really simple...but still deep. Good job

I realli like how yove writen this... up until now i have never thought of death like this....hmmm,...... thx for the comment by thwe way
kitty

GOOD POEM MAKES U THINK ALOT N ITS WRITEN WELL I GIVE U A 5/5
~KRISTINA~

There were alot of good question 'mongst that poem & it makes you think about what death could be like then. Good job.
-Becca

This is good. i would like to know the answers to thise as wll. lol.

This is a lil odd sorry but i dint xactly like it im not sure y though so dont take it 2 heart keep writing n u will get better. pla comment some of mine if u can

I like this because I think we all truly want to know what death means and feels like. Whether your happy with life or not I think we would all like to know what its like on the other side Ive been curious about that ever since I can remember..Its tempting to leave and yet a part of us wants to stay its bittersweet really..

Nice work!

Awesome poem keep up the great work

Wow.. so much depth. Nice work, I liked it very much. God bless.

-Jennifer. Overall Rating:4.5/5

Really insightful. I liked it. 5/5