My Beautiful Trio

by Jaime   Jul 16, 2006


The final angel has been called
The trio will be united once again
I see it more as a blooming beginning
Instead of just a tragic end

Maybe up in the flowing clouds
Your maniacal plans will restart
The saints might not get you like I did
Tell them not to take it to heart

May the sunflower seeds be plentiful
And the wheels the best you have seen
I'll even miss the messes you made
The floors are all so heart-breakingly clean

The worldly boundary that separates us
Will only be in the middle for so long
Until then, keep your head up and smiling
We'll think of each other, we all can be strong

You were my release for that whole time
So now when happiness can't be found
I'll just look up at the star-filled sky
And see my beautiful trio shining down

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  • 17 years ago

    by SolelyGuitar

    What an amazing poem! Man I wish I could right like you... :( lol

    Oh and my song "No Stones" it's classic rock

  • 17 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Very authentically moving and pleasantly visual......

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelly

    I THINK THIS POEM IS JUST BEAUTIFUL. WONDERFUL IMAGERY. I THINK IT HAS A SENSE OF HOPE WITHIN IT. I LOVED IT! 5/5

    KELLY
    XX

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    This was beautiful.
    The words, the imagery, the emotion.
    It was all there and it was all equisite.
    I especially loved the last line.
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    This was a very touching and beautiful poem, You painted such a magnificent picture that was very easy to see. The emotion is there, and the imagery was great. You have done another splended job. congradulations! I only found a few problems that are minor, but it sort of threw the flow off just a little.

    In the first stanza last line:

    Instead of just a tragic end

    I think you could have left the word just out of it because it threw the flow off for me. In the third stanza, last line also there was the word all that you could have left out also because it thew the flow off. There are other minor error's that you might want to look over also. But overall this was a very beautiful piece of art. And this is what I like to see when I read your work. Keep writing these beautiful magnificent pieces and I will keep reading. 5/5

    Love
    Letty

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