Unforgiven

by *~kat~*~broken reflection~*   Jul 16, 2006


A distant place,
In her mind,
She's lost in thought,
Leaves reality behind,

Her unforgiven sins,
Are in her mind,
Although no-one see's,
It's all hidden inside,

Her overwhelming thoughts,
Run through her mind,
Making her wish,
Instead she'd have died,

Her fear not forgotten,
Just pushed aside,
Searching for the forgiveness,
She will one day find,

A feeling of selfishness,
As she looks at the knife,
She's still having those dreams,
That distress her through the night,

She's not goin to break,
Although she has cracked,
She's living through the day,
Cause one day she will look back,
When she's finally found the forgiveness,
That she's always lacked

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  • 18 years ago

    by Willow

    Very good. i am amazed at ur writting evertime i read it. so much of it is like i feel. some of it isn't but still. i have terrible dreams about my friend being abused by her mum, and my brother in car accidnets and i have even dreamed i was crying, then woke up a bit later and it felt like i had been. dont think ur alone in this world. i'm here if u ever want to tlk. just email me. i'm an aussie too. keep up the good writting.
    love ya,
    Willow xxoo

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    This is really good. You described perfectly what i've tried to decide in alot of my poems

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