" prayed that you would see me,
That you would see my true beauty,
And all that you wanted me to be.
My body began to shake,
My lips began to tremble,
And finally my heart began to break."

that was really sad, but i enjoyed it a lot! sometimes i've felt like that, and your poem was really well written...5/5!

I really liked it,it was sad but i can relate 5/5
~courtney~