Uncharted Turmoil

Wow.. that was amazing holly.. the words you used were powerful and created wonderful imagery.. your emotions are clear and it flows well.. excellent job! 5/5

I absolutely love your poetry. You have such an intensity in your writing that only telent can provide. Awesome!5/5

This is very intense; I love it. Great choice of words to set a dark, even trapped tone to the poem. Great job.

I`m sorry about my speeling, im typing through an old monitor and cant see everything that clear, you know I meant beautiful..lol.

Ahh Ms. Holly, so good to see you writing again, but this was well worht the wait, the first stanza is just brilliant and sets the tone for the whole poem. Bautiful as always. Love, Tim