Ahh, the torture and release of poetry.I can truly relate and sympathize, no FEEL every word you have written here.A really great piece, Holly.Truly soul-bearing and yet so universal in emotion to many of us poets who all know this thought/emotion.
Take care,
Gary Jurechka

Sweety, so glad you overcame your writer's block. Once again you turned the problem into a success. Excellent write.

Holly, You are so talented. I really liked this poem. It describes what I feel right now. 5/5 I added you to my favorites

Ahh Ms. Holly, so good to see you writing again, but this was well worht the wait, the first stanza is just brilliant and sets the tone for the whole poem. Bautiful as always. Love, Tim

I`m sorry about my speeling, im typing through an old monitor and cant see everything that clear, you know I meant beautiful..lol.

This is very intense; I love it. Great choice of words to set a dark, even trapped tone to the poem. Great job.

I absolutely love your poetry. You have such an intensity in your writing that only telent can provide. Awesome!5/5

Wow.. that was amazing holly.. the words you used were powerful and created wonderful imagery.. your emotions are clear and it flows well.. excellent job! 5/5