by Hayley Jul 16, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
As i drag that knife across my thigh |
Ohh hunni, my heart bleeds for you, I feel your pain and I can relate to what you are going through. |
W0W!! I love that poem. Well i'm kind of speechless about it but i jus really got into it. The rhyming was excellent and had a good rhythm. 5/5 |
by kia
I liked it alot. Love to see it finished. Great so far. Really related. Great flow. Really well written. Take care. 5\5. Love you to comment on any of mine. |