by Danielle Jul 16, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
At first everything was dark, i was in a hole i couldn't get out of. it was like there was weight on my shoulders. it wouldn't get off. i had to find an escape. a real quick one too. i couldn't deal with all this stress...I'm looking....I'm searching real hard....I finally found one... A quick escape to get my mind off you... a quick escape to get away from everything we did... A quick escape to get my life better... I start to less weight on my shoulders, as i feel the blood drip from my wrist, I feel 10 times better than before.. The blade is red, not one silver part is seen.. at this moment in time i wanted my life to end.. and its all because of you |
by Ashley
Nice poem, I can relate to what your friend has been through.. It amazes me how well you can describe the situation even though it is not about you! Good job. please comment on some of my poems x |