Frozen*Water

by Aussie   Jul 16, 2006


She's stock to a water fountain
just can't get out
no one would bother
for they got their own problems to deal

they beat each other to death
to bring pain as revenge
as her screams turn to regrets
as regrets freeze her in pain

she melts the regrets away with warmth
but twice as more
builds up
each day
by then she knows
freedom will come
at the end

the end had came
when a knife fell in her hand
she aim it to her heart
has snow melts away

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Hey this is a sad poem girl can u make me a poem if u do ill make one for u...

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Its nice to see a unique writing style and good ideas, it was nicely written perhaps some punctuation would help but all the same a good job keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    This poem defines how you can write a good poem without it rhyming
    suficed 2 say
    its brilliant
    5/5 :]
    Sarah Harrhy xox

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    Wow.. this poem says alot... 5/5 good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww... that is so sad! But you did a great job on it! You had some great imagery and amazing word usage! I loved it! 5/5 Keep it up!

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