Awww :(
5/5

Aww... that is so sad! But you did a great job on it! You had some great imagery and amazing word usage! I loved it! 5/5 Keep it up!

Wow.. this poem says alot... 5/5 good job

This poem defines how you can write a good poem without it rhyming
suficed 2 say
its brilliant
5/5 :]
Sarah Harrhy xox

Its nice to see a unique writing style and good ideas, it was nicely written perhaps some punctuation would help but all the same a good job keep it up.

Hey this is a sad poem girl can u make me a poem if u do ill make one for u...