Comments : You Don't Even Know

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Love to red your letters over and over,
    [Should be 'read']
    I cry myself to sleep at the though of you,
    [I'm guessing 'though' should be 'thought' =)]

    I thought it was a pretty good/sad poem. I liked the repitition you gave it also. The last lines really brought it all together aswell. I thought it was great. Keep it up!! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ye Seul

    Awww.. this is so sad but also sweet poem!! i think this stanza is my favorite..

    I give you my heart, I Love You,
    and that's something you will never know.

    it is really great stanza to finish the poem beautifully.. awesome job!! 5/5