by Insignia Jul 16, 2006
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
A last breath, a last batting of times eyelids, |
by Cyma Khan
Nice poem!! keep writting |
Some nice metaphors. The words not as good as in the other one but this was good. A different nature poem than others. Liked it because it had this darkness with a glimmer of light at the end. Good job for that. |